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The pain returned for the fourth time, and this time he tossed his head back and cried out; a hot, rush of fluids gushing out of both his vagina and anus all at once. It was hot against his cooled skin. He panted and gasped as he struggled to back up, seeing the fluids being washed off where he lay from the waves lapping at the edges.
He was so persistent and his tenacity annoyed her. He was so clever and his innovation annoyed her. He wore his emotions on his face so openly and that annoyed her. But what annoyed her more than anything was how much she noticed him. A series of short vignettes about Astrid and Hiccup. HTTYD2 spoilers.
Another common thread from our respondents was how enjoyable it is to see a couple that can’t traditionally make a biological child be given this chance. This usually involves same sex couples, but I was surprised to find that some infertile women could relate to this aspect of the genre as well.
Ferris gripped the rocks edges and squeezed his eyes shut, groaning as the pain contracted his stomach. He placed a hand over his swollen belly and panted, trying to crawl up onto the rocks. He hauled himself up once the pain passed, and he laid back on his back as his tail morphed into two, perfect human legs.
Title: Claiming Christian: Wolf Shifter MPreg Romace (Wolf’s Mate #2) Author: Kiki Burrelli Publisher: Self published Release Date: October 19, 2016 Genre(s): Gay Paranormal Romance / Mpreg Page Count: 210 pages Reviewed by: Tosh Heat Level: 4 flames out of 5 Rating: 5 stars out of 5 Blurb: Derrick is an arrogant alpha billionaire poised to take control of his pack. Christian is a good guy who is always finishing…
Francis bit his lips, shaking his head. “..No,” he answered truthfully. His whole entire backside ached and he was also having difficulty regaining breath, his swollen womb was placing too much pressure on his diaphragm. Groaning, Francis rubbed one hand over his stomach and held the other to the middle of his back where the pain was strongest. Whining and groaning, he rested his chin against Niso’s shoulder. “I think..I wanna get out..c-change positions..”Niso nodded and looked down at him, wrapping his arms around him to help him up. “Alright, back to the bed?” He asked softly, helping to lift Francis up out of the tub. He could tell from the swell of Francis’ stomach that the younger male wasn’t done, and he cringed at the thought that Francis might not have the motivation to keep pushing. Francis pressed his lips together. “Y-Yeah. But hurry, I can feel it moving down..” He let Niso help him to his feet, swaying a little as he spread his legs and shuffled towards the bedroom, his waddle especially pronounced now. A new bolt of pain laced through him each time his hips were jostled. They were barely to the bed when another contraction tore down his lower back and abdomen, forcing a surprised cry from his lips. His legs trembled and he practically fell into Niso’s arms.
”Young Master,You can do this. I know you’re exhausted,Scared and in pain but you need to get this baby out! Push!” Sebastian demands,unadvertenly screaming out as he feels his own baby begin to crown. Ciel assumes he’s just mad at him,and resumes pushing. He screams out and with a push,The babies head is clear. Sebastian desperately tugs,Albeit gently and frees the baby,A protesting baby boy. He wraps him up and places him with Ciel before laying more towels on the bed and laying beside Ciel. Ciel thinks nothing of it,Just places his hand on Sebastian’s stomach,His eyes going wide as he feels the demon’s stomach harden under his hand.
Fetus in fetu, though not an actual pregnancy, is an extremely rare condition in which a mass of tissue resembling a fetus forms inside the body. This is a developmental abnormality in which a fertilized egg splits as if to form identical twins, but one half becomes enveloped by the other, and an entire living organ system with torso and limbs can develop inside the host. The abnormality occurs in 1 in 500,000 live births in humans.
Enter Roam Ashworth. If Roam finds an alpha on OmegaDate, then it won’t be his first trip around the block—he’s got a three-year-old son from his previous relationship to show for it. But there’s heartache there, not anger; his partner died in a car accident before Roam could even tell him he was pregnant, shattering his happily-ever-after forever.
Review: All of the elements of a good, unlikely alpha/omega mpreg romance and an underlying supernatural, political plot were present, but the work was lacking in the execution and exposition of these creative story lines and characters. The book raced through developments, shortly describing major events and changes without compelling prose or developing feelings and revelations at an appropriate pace that would entice and draw the reader in. Basically, the story and character ideas and conflicts were very solid, but the execution within individual scenes was often overly quick and simplistic.
“Th-They’re coming…!” He cried, the baby’s second shoulder squeezing out of him as the egg was pushed further out as well. His mate held his baby and reached behind him, massaging his lower back as he pushed to birth the egg and baby together. Another long hard push and they both dropped a little further, the egg was now crowned to it’s widest point.
anon asked, “Monster! Sora all big and pregnant with a big litter? :3c” so of course i had to oblige! his new form looks cat-like so here he is with… quite a large litter haha! sora doesn’t look like he minds being huge tho..
One of the two men was Kakashi, his former sensei and an alpha in his prime, leaning against the wall with his orange book in his hand. Not that he was really reading it, not at all, he was watching the young blonde with the fox mask who practically drooling over him and the other alpha named Akatora, his long time friend and team mate. Akatora was eating his food, having his tiger mask on the side of his head, but when his eyes meet Kakashi’s, the man knew that the other was as aware of the fox watching them as he was. They were both aware of the smell of omega pheromones in the room, a sweet and thick smell that told them that Naruto had started a heat cycle.
He dazed off through the window as his history teacher droned on about the political views of Hawaii in the early 1900’s. Jim couldn’t keep focus on such nonsense; he didn’t care what the political views of Hawaii once were. He was only a few weeks delivering a secret he had been hiding so well, his mind could only ever drift off to the thought of what was yet to come. Jim’s daze was broken was he was welcomed back to reality when he felt her shift a bit.
However, there’s a lot more to the beautiful omega than glitter and pom poms. Enough to leave Levi’s head spinning and wondering just what he’s going to do with the boy he can’t get his mind off of living under the same roof.
I nodded kindly, stood up and made the small walk to the other chair. I was careful to walk as normally as I could, sit down easily, overall making it discrete as possible that I am hiding a growing baby bump below my Calvin Klein jumper I had changed into before we all left the tour bus.
Scratch that, it was the perfect time to socialize: a lazy Saturday morning with cotton candy clouds and drowsy orange sunlight. The two were out shopping for Arthur’s insistent cravings. Alfred had wanted it to remain just the two of them, relishing every second of their time together before the inevitable addition to their little family, but they’d managed to draw in quite the crowd upon their entrance to the store.
Jerricho, Jerry, is a librarian and he’s also an Anzuni Demon Prince. He’s approaching his 25th birthday which is when he’s expected to marry an obnoxious man of his parents choosing, Ty, and bear his children. Oh, and he’s expected to be a virgin when it happens! Jerry loves his parents and knows he must obey the laws of the Anzuni clan, but he would love to keep the hard-won freedom he’s had for the last few years. After meeting his ‘fiancée’ for the first time, he also desperately wants just one night with the human man he’s fallen in love with, Rex. Thanks to his friend Keith, he gets that chance. Jerry must leave after their one night and return home to his parents, and it breaks his heart and also Rex’s, but more importantly he later finds out he’s pregnant, and of course, Rex is the father.
NOTE: This is a non-shifter Omegaverse story with alpha/omega/beta dynamics, heats, knotting, and mpreg. In this world, omegas are second-class citizens with few civil rights and almost no protections under the law. Trigger warnings for physical, emotional, and sexual abuse. 67,000 words.
Once Dean’s fully slipped into a sugar coma, Cas slinks an arm around Dean’s protruding belly, softly humming Enochian lullabies. Luckily, Dean has no objections to being cuddled tighter, grunting his content as he rubs his nose affectionately against Cas’ shoulder.
I find myself tearing up as Lou finishes combing through my curls gently. I keep my head low, my eyes blurring as I try to focus on the screen. This is ridiculous. I keep telling myself to stop crying, shake the feeling of being alone…but I can’t. It’s always there, lingering in the air, almost as if haunting me it’s constantly on my mind.
Fever is making me crazy. This can’t possibly be real. He did not want to look again, but forced himself back to the water. He took a deep breath and leaned over; his own reflection wavered in the moving surface, complete with horn.
On his way home from a meeting of the North American werewolf council, Armand La Marche is stopped in his limousine by a boy who is hurt by an unknown assailant who murdered his friend. After decades of searching, Armand has found his mate. There is one problem, someone is trying to kill Sean.
As the latest contraction gripped her bulging belly, her tail curling of its own accord in reaction to the pain, she groaned, “Not a million times, Tris, maybe just two or three.” Her eyes were scrunched shut in an effort to block everything, including the pain, out.
He went over to the cot to look at his daughter. He stroked the top of her head. She wriggled slightly at the touch. Sniper then proceeded to pick her up to hold her in his arms. She looked up at him with her sea blue eyes. The assassin couldn’t help but grin.