The blurb for this fired my imagination from the start. In a world where omegas are second-class citizens with few civil rights and almost no protections under the law. Bring it on I thought. I’m ready.
He groaned as his finger felt a smooth, hard surface. An egg! He could feel the tip, it was definitely an egg. He groaned and pulled his finger back, gripping some rocks now. He bore down and spread his legs as he did, groaning as the egg moved down his anus further. It was far slower than his baby’s progress though.
I just knew this book was going to be just, like the first two. But oh no. I get to 93% of the book and the tears kicked in. I hurt for Jax but most of all I loved his strength. Karter surprised me in the best way. Karter’s father upset me but the man redeemed himself in the best way. Wow! I love this series and I’m looking forward to the next book.
“The egg will probably come out in ten minutes or so, but it will be very painful.” Joel warned, watching as the first drug-induced contraction made the man scream and cry hysterically, grabbing the sweaty, heaving orb that was forcing his legs apart.
I understand the idea that not every romantic couple needs to clash again and again, and not every minor or major issue needs to be driven into a soap-opera style confrontation. However, the extreme level of nonchalance for major developments (that could shake the future of their entire world) and over-the-top trust (for characters who did not seem to have yet really earned it yet from each other) just made the scenes rather unbelievable and simply just too pat for my preferences.
Sniper also clenched his teeth from the pain Spy was inflicting on his poor hand. Suddenly, Spy felt the baby slip out and the pressure and pain leave almost instantly. The Spy huffed with both relief and exhaustion. It was over. Finally. That was, without a doubt, one of the most unpleasant experiences he’d ever had the misfortune to go through. He certainly never wanted to go through that again.
“I think we should name them, Albany and Zeke, what do you think?” Jamie asked Jess ” I love those names” THE END (p.s I am not perfect at grammar or spelling so if there are some spelling or grammar mistakes I am sorry) I hope you guys enjoy! please leave some requests. I like to do this type of writing so birth requests, like natural birth, mpreg birth, or anything you would like to read
”No,No Ciel. Spread your legs. I know this is uncomfortable for you,I know but I need you to cooperate with me.” He says,Biting his tongue with pain,Trying to prevent Ciel from noticing before finally spreading Ciel’s legs back out. He feels in Ciel’s anus and his eyes go wide as he feels that Ciel is in fact,in labor. He takes a deep breath and withdraws his finger,Wiping it on an unused handkerchief.
There are enough elements that show promise, but overall it reminds of other works with decently outlined but thinly written stories that surround very heated erotic scenes – except this mpreg story really doesn’t have much heat either. This is most appropriate for readers who like Alpha/Omega MPREG with a well-thought story but do not mind if it is thinly written (and has very little explicit heat).
It doesn’t help that… he’s completely and utterly alone, with only quick and easy online hook-ups for company. But what would he do if he met somebody that he couldn’t discard after a few sexy camera chats?
“Natural instincts, but I’m done with that now. I need you Lance…” Keith breathed out, slowly standing up and beginning to pull his boxers down. “My body needs you…” Lance was about to comment and ask for the millionth time if Keith was sure about this, but he was left a gaping mess as he stared at Keith. He pulled his boxers down and showed how wet they were to Lance, like a towel that had been soaked in water. He then turned around to show Lance the cause of all this, and holy fuck was Lance totally screwed. First of all, Keith turning around all of a sudden like that basically blasted Lance in the face with the mouth watering aroma of his heat, and second of all, the view of his hole pulsing and secreting liquid like drool was nearly enough for Lance to get off to just by seeing it. He gulped to once more reaffirm exactly how screwed he was.
And while magpieinthemorning (female, bi, 30-40, Germany) dislikes “romanticizing and normalizing the existing gender oppression in our society” when it comes to A/B/O, she adds: “Disclaimer: it’s possible that the couple of omegaverse fics I read were extreme and not representative of the genre. However, they were widely recommended by members of the fandom (that’s how I found them).”
The book is very good, liked that either one was sure what was going to happen only that a baby was made and now they had to work on what to do now and one had a hard time in believing any of it was true that where the fun comes in, how they get to love one an other, want more of her books
Ezra is a rear tiger from India and staying in one place is not his lifestyle, always staying at one place a least a week so no rooting down. The time fates step in he isn’t to happy to find an oversize beaver ‘ his word’s’ bear that his body is craving more then the human guy he brought to his hotel room. These two will connect quickly but Matt’s luck has put a speed bump in his path, his father and his prior commit to see seen to or else, his father will blackmail him to get what daddy… Read more
As I said before, I understand, to some readers mpreg is strange. To picture a man waddling with a large stomach, it cannot be real or conceivable. But I ask the same question isn’t that what fiction and fantasy are? And to add another question isn’t the writer’s job to make it believable? And my answer is yes. Our job as the writer is to keep the reader engaged in the story we are telling that reading about a man getting pregnant is nothing but an everyday occurrence.